21 May.
What age is Fr. Jack? Much younger than he looks. Structure the ages.
/.|.\
Does Fr. Jack tell Rose the story of the house-boy + the dance? Does she instigate it at the end? (30 May) Does he tell it to Narrator?
Malaria – bad air.
/.|.\
Where is Chris in all this? Wife? Fiancee? Dead? At home with large, young family?
/.|.\
(1) The radio is much more important than a theatrical device to provide music. Explore that carefully.
(2) The play is NOT about Fr. Jack’s or the family’s Catholicism. That must be positively avoided.
(3) 30th May: Why not no. (2) – [illeg.] Fr. J. sent home because of his involvement with tribal rites; and bringing that other spiritual element into the home + thereby transforming it.